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Rb
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Re: Too thin
« Reply #15 on: Dec 1st, 2003, 9:13pm » |
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 ...Well done Chelle....*wanders off to read more*
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MadHatter
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Re: Too thin
« Reply #16 on: Dec 2nd, 2003, 11:51am » |
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Really artful portrayal of anorexia. It's something that's difficult to address but has to be adressed and I salute you for doing it. The low self-respect that a lot of modern people have for themselves is really captured here.
You really do deserve this spotlight position, congrats
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Jessie
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Re: Too thin
« Reply #17 on: Dec 3rd, 2003, 08:44am » |
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So sad...I love how you expressed anorexia. Amazing and very profound poem! I love this!
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Re: Too thin
« Reply #18 on: Dec 3rd, 2003, 7:00pm » |
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Great write. I love the way that even though you recognise the problem you don't really know what to do about it. I hope you never have to write about this from real life...
Love Queenie
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MorganRemembers
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Re: Too thin
« Reply #19 on: Dec 3rd, 2003, 8:17pm » |
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wow.... very powerful, especially because it's so true! I have a friend who had this problem last year and I still don't think she's better.
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Megana
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Re: Too thin
« Reply #20 on: Dec 5th, 2003, 02:00am » |
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Wow.....not sure what else to say......this is really well written. It really tugged at something deep inside.......very emotional. I really enjoyed reading this. Congrates on the spotlight!
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Re: Too thin
« Reply #21 on: Dec 6th, 2003, 9:21pm » |
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good write!
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Alchemist
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Re: Too thin
« Reply #22 on: Dec 7th, 2003, 01:00am » |
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What a very good poem. Excellent stuff that's truly deserving of this weeks spotlight!
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We must make literature and art a component of the entire revolutionary machine, use it uniting the people, attacking the enemy and destroying the enemy - Mao Tse Tung
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Chelle
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Re: Too thin
« Reply #23 on: Mar 11th, 2006, 02:07am » |
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OMG I had a spotlight and didn't even know it? Sheesh >.<
Thanks for all the comments even though I am finally getting to them. 
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Once upon a time I dreamed of unicorns and Vikings. Then my fantasy was shattered by crude reality. Smoke, stench, blood, and pain were all a part of my daily routine. Now I just keep my chin up and hope and pray that someday, somehow, my fantasy will return to me. Cause I just can't live in reality
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